Wednesday, September 06, 2006 . 5:04 PM
Beautiful Sculpture.
A sculpture
A perfect representation of art
A woman of brilliant caliber
A true picture of beauty.
In her eyes
A glimpse of eternity
Lost in the nothingness
Encumbered by sorrow,
Swallowed by pain of the past.
In her hair
Lies long years of suffering
That molded a broken soul,
Tougher, stronger, invincible
Braced against the tempest of the world.
In her hands
An iron knuckle
A weapon against indestructible walls,
An obstacle against uncertain waters
Still fighting, still afloat.
Her heart
Embraced with burning desire
Courage emanating from within
Adventure she seeks
Passion longs triumph and victory.
hehe :) It took me 10-15 minutes to create this poem during our English Proficiency class.. Our instructor Ms. Barrie Nelly Cruz (nice name? don't you think..?) gave each group a picture wherein we should create a story or a poem out of it. The picture that my group received was.. a portrait of a woman, a Vaness Wu look-alike.. At first I thought she was a transvestite..lol they all laughed at me :p.. After that minute of pandemonium..I delivered the poem, then Ms. Cruz made a comment on our presentation.. their reactions made me fall out of my seat.. Hooray! they loved our presentation :)
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